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Taciturn by ~LostMotive:iconLostMotive:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


You can spend
The mintues of the day
With idle talk,
Empty subjects;
With no ground
Nor footing,
Not even scraping the surface,
But what if I want more?
©2008 ~LostMotive
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Submitted: May 16
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For those times when you really want to get know someone but you talk about the daftest of things, blowing your efforts out the water; making you feel like an ass. Also when your talking to someone youve know for ages but your suddenly degraded to; 'Umm....the weathers nice....'


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~actualtwilight:iconactualtwilight: May 16, 2008, 2:10:01 PM
I really love this. It completely describes why I get so frustrated with conversation sometimes! Excellent work!

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I never thought that I had any more to give, you're pushing me so far. Here I am without you. Drink to all that we have lost, mistakes we have made. Everything will change, but love remains the same. - "Love Remains the Same" by Gavin Rossdale
~x-Jett-x:iconx-Jett-x: May 17, 2008, 2:48:22 AM
i know what you mean, my once best friends, we now harldy talk at all.
but hey, dont give up, most of my friends, i meet by starting to talk to them about the stupidest things, like zombie invations and comics, stuff like that, it all leads to biggere stuff ;P
as per usual, love it, it annoys me how talented you are D< :P

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Melt your headaches, call it home....
~hannadc:iconhannadc: May 17, 2008, 9:52:45 AM
I really understand this.....
it accounts for most days of my life being totally honest ^^;

hope it doesnt happen to you to much

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:spotlight-left:Haroo and hanna :D! :spotlight-right:
:ohnoes: :hypermind: I SWEAR ITS NOT HENTAI
i :love: my friends!
~LostMotive:iconLostMotive: May 18, 2008, 4:07:58 AM
Thankyou for the comment and fav :)

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I Whisper Empty Sounds In Your Ear,
In Hope That You Won't let Go,
Take These Pieces And Build Them Skywards...
Biffy Clyro
~LostMotive:iconLostMotive: May 18, 2008, 4:11:05 AM
Not sure about that, after all it did take me ages to start writing again :p

Thankyou anyway :)

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I Whisper Empty Sounds In Your Ear,
In Hope That You Won't let Go,
Take These Pieces And Build Them Skywards...
Biffy Clyro
~LostMotive:iconLostMotive: May 18, 2008, 4:13:37 AM
Thanks for the favourite :)
Not really its just a couple of people, not a big thing but the smallest things really can annoy the hell out of you :P

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I Whisper Empty Sounds In Your Ear,
In Hope That You Won't let Go,
Take These Pieces And Build Them Skywards...
Biffy Clyro
~actualtwilight:iconactualtwilight: May 20, 2008, 8:23:00 PM
You're very welcome. :)

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I never thought that I had any more to give, you're pushing me so far. Here I am without you. Drink to all that we have lost, mistakes we have made. Everything will change, but love remains the same. - "Love Remains the Same" by Gavin Rossdale
~hannadc:iconhannadc: May 22, 2008, 12:42:14 PM
yeah..its like sometimes the smallest comment can ring in your head for hours and it really upsets you..

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:spotlight-left:Haroo and hanna :D! :spotlight-right:
:ohnoes: :hypermind: I SWEAR ITS NOT HENTAI
i :love: my friends!
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